雅思考試指導(dǎo)：雅思寫作真題解析

（一）考試攻略
我想略談一下自己作為考生的一些備考經(jīng)驗(yàn)。主要談的是TASK2的備考。我想首先從四個(gè)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)說起。
第一是TR：在準(zhǔn)備的時(shí)候，我盡量看范文當(dāng)中的一些觀點(diǎn)，避免在寫作中出現(xiàn)跑題的情況，還會(huì)根據(jù)歷年機(jī)經(jīng)，把題目熟悉一遍，對(duì)于那些高頻題目我會(huì)著重拿出來練習(xí)，修改，而對(duì)于相對(duì)比較偏的題目，我會(huì)把大部分時(shí)間用在想中心句上面。因?yàn)樵诳紙?chǎng)上碰見熟悉題目的可能性非常大，所以這個(gè)工作我認(rèn)為非常有必要。
第二是CC：這個(gè)也是很難達(dá)到的，尤其是在主體段論述展開的時(shí)候，我一般的寫作方法是把中心句，原因，結(jié)果分別用簡(jiǎn)短的中文列出來，之后在寫成英文，當(dāng)然在寫成英文的時(shí)候會(huì)注意每一段話盡量用一些從句，把內(nèi)容具體細(xì)化，這樣才能夠達(dá)到主體段60字左右這么樣一個(gè)要求。一些連詞的使用，我會(huì)格外注意，一定會(huì)做到恰當(dāng)使用，該出現(xiàn)轉(zhuǎn)折的時(shí)候會(huì)用轉(zhuǎn)折連詞，不該的時(shí)候一定不會(huì)亂用。
第三是LR：這項(xiàng)是最難達(dá)到的，也是最難突破的，對(duì)語(yǔ)言要求非常高，我會(huì)把大量時(shí)間花在課外閱讀上，多讀一些BBC 或者the economists 來積累一些collocations然后用在自己作文當(dāng)中，使自己的文章更加地道。
第四是GRA ：這個(gè)我在平時(shí)寫作文的時(shí)候會(huì)注意避免小的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，如主謂不一致，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等等，這樣在分?jǐn)?shù)上有個(gè)比較好的保障，之后我也會(huì)試著把簡(jiǎn)單句變成復(fù)雜句。這個(gè)過程一定要有水平高的人幫助你修改，不然自己很難看出相關(guān)錯(cuò)誤。
（二）范文解析
劍8第一套考官范文
Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
1 A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only.  2 It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. 3 Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.
4 In order to be a good member of any society, the individual must respect and obey the rules of their community and share their values. 5  Educating children to understand the need to obey rules and respect others always begins in the home and is widely thought to be the responsibility of parents. 6 They will certainly be the first to help children learn what  is important in life, how they are expected to behave and what role they will play in their world.
7 However, learning to understand and share the value system of a whole society cannot be achieved just in the home. 8 Once a child goes to school, they are entering a wider community where teachers and peers will have just as much influence as their parents do at home. 9 At school, children will experience working and living with people from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society. 10 This experience should teach them how to co-operate with each other and how to contribute to the life of their community.
11 But to be a valuable member of any community is not like learning a simple skill. 12 It is something that an individual goes on learning throughout life and it is the responsibility of every member of a society to take responsibility for helping the younger generation to become active and able members of that society.
題目大意：有人覺得父母應(yīng)該教小孩如何成為社會(huì)有用的人。其他人卻覺得學(xué)校才是學(xué)習(xí)這個(gè)東西的地方。討論兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)和給出你的看法和觀點(diǎn)。
題解：
這是近年來比較常見的“討論類”題型，“discuss both view and give your opinion”。這種題目的特點(diǎn)是會(huì)出現(xiàn)兩個(gè)相反的看法，需要考生分開討論這兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，然后給出個(gè)人看法。此題所羅列的觀點(diǎn)是：1，父母應(yīng)該教小孩；2，學(xué)校應(yīng)該教小孩。文章主體部分應(yīng)該這兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)各寫一段。
開頭段
作者用了兩句話平鋪直敘地表達(dá)自己的看法：成為社會(huì)上有用的個(gè)人是重要的。文字簡(jiǎn)單平實(shí)，說說一個(gè)話題的重要性，就足夠了。之后一句話簡(jiǎn)明扼要表明了自己的觀點(diǎn)。
主體部分
三句話的論述路徑是：句4是句5的鋪墊, 句5是整段話的立場(chǎng), 句6是立場(chǎng)（也就是句5）的細(xì)化。
句7和句8事實(shí)上是一句話的不同說法，是這個(gè)段落的主要立場(chǎng)和觀點(diǎn)。
句9 和句10是支持和解釋觀點(diǎn)的句子。句9 和句10有因果關(guān)系。
句9的“experience”作為句10的主語(yǔ)，保持連貫性。
句11是結(jié)論段的作者立場(chǎng)。句12用比較隱晦的語(yǔ)言暗示父母和學(xué)校都應(yīng)該擔(dān)負(fù)教育的責(zé)任。
（三）考試資料：
相關(guān)翻譯練習(xí)，使用與不同話題類型，注意其中的collocations.
1除非國(guó)家采取措施確保國(guó)際援助公平地分配，它們很難獲得國(guó)際組織的支持。
Unless countries take steps to ensure that international aid is distributed fairly, they will find it difficult to enlist the support of international organizations.
2人們一直有一個(gè)想法，法律抑制人的創(chuàng)造力和阻礙社會(huì)發(fā)展
Among the public the idea that laws stifle creativity and hinder social development persists.
3有人質(zhì)疑要求員工穿制服的政策
Some people have cast doubt on the policy that requires all employees to wear uniforms
4投資在保險(xiǎn)或者債券上確實(shí)能夠保護(hù)人們抵御通貨膨脹，但是投資者需要警惕價(jià)格波動(dòng)的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)
The investment in insurance or bonds can shield people from insurance but investors should be wary of price volatility.
5鄉(xiāng)村到城市的轉(zhuǎn)移雖然部分解決了農(nóng)村的失業(yè)問題，但是對(duì)土地稀缺的城市來說，卻使某些問題更加嚴(yán)重
The rural-to-urban shift has partially addressed the unemployment issue in rural areas, but aggravated some problems in land-scarce cities.
6我們現(xiàn)在所知道的環(huán)境問題不過是冰山一角
The environmental problems that are known to us at this stage are merely the tip of the iceberg.
7某些商業(yè)女性的成功促使人們重新思考傳統(tǒng)的觀念：女人不象男人那么果斷和聰明。
The success of some business women prompts people to rethink the traditional belief that women are not as decisive and intelligent as men.
8人們?cè)谀贻p的時(shí)候揮霍金錢，對(duì)晚年的生活卻有很大的影響。
People in their early adulthood squander money, a habit that takes its toll in later years.                                    武漢新航道培訓(xùn)學(xué)校  雅思寫作考前預(yù)測(cè)精煉6.5分課程（1v3）
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