雅思考試指導：雅思寫作真題解析

（一）考試攻略
我想略談一下自己作為考生的一些備考經(jīng)驗。主要談的是TASK2的備考。我想首先從四個評分標準說起。
第一是TR：在準備的時候，我盡量看范文當中的一些觀點，避免在寫作中出現(xiàn)跑題的情況，還會根據(jù)歷年機經(jīng)，把題目熟悉一遍，對于那些高頻題目我會著重拿出來練習，修改，而對于相對比較偏的題目，我會把大部分時間用在想中心句上面。因為在考場上碰見熟悉題目的可能性非常大，所以這個工作我認為非常有必要。
第二是CC：這個也是很難達到的，尤其是在主體段論述展開的時候，我一般的寫作方法是把中心句，原因，結(jié)果分別用簡短的中文列出來，之后在寫成英文，當然在寫成英文的時候會注意每一段話盡量用一些從句，把內(nèi)容具體細化，這樣才能夠達到主體段60字左右這么樣一個要求。一些連詞的使用，我會格外注意，一定會做到恰當使用，該出現(xiàn)轉(zhuǎn)折的時候會用轉(zhuǎn)折連詞，不該的時候一定不會亂用。
第三是LR：這項是最難達到的，也是最難突破的，對語言要求非常高，我會把大量時間花在課外閱讀上，多讀一些BBC 或者the economists 來積累一些collocations然后用在自己作文當中，使自己的文章更加地道。
第四是GRA ：這個我在平時寫作文的時候會注意避免小的語法錯誤，如主謂不一致，動詞時態(tài)等等，這樣在分數(shù)上有個比較好的保障，之后我也會試著把簡單句變成復雜句。這個過程一定要有水平高的人幫助你修改，不然自己很難看出相關(guān)錯誤。
（二）范文解析
劍8第一套考官范文
Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
1 A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only.  2 It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. 3 Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.
4 In order to be a good member of any society, the individual must respect and obey the rules of their community and share their values. 5  Educating children to understand the need to obey rules and respect others always begins in the home and is widely thought to be the responsibility of parents. 6 They will certainly be the first to help children learn what  is important in life, how they are expected to behave and what role they will play in their world.
7 However, learning to understand and share the value system of a whole society cannot be achieved just in the home. 8 Once a child goes to school, they are entering a wider community where teachers and peers will have just as much influence as their parents do at home. 9 At school, children will experience working and living with people from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society. 10 This experience should teach them how to co-operate with each other and how to contribute to the life of their community.
11 But to be a valuable member of any community is not like learning a simple skill. 12 It is something that an individual goes on learning throughout life and it is the responsibility of every member of a society to take responsibility for helping the younger generation to become active and able members of that society.
題目大意：有人覺得父母應(yīng)該教小孩如何成為社會有用的人。其他人卻覺得學校才是學習這個東西的地方。討論兩個觀點和給出你的看法和觀點。
題解：
這是近年來比較常見的“討論類”題型，“discuss both view and give your opinion”。這種題目的特點是會出現(xiàn)兩個相反的看法，需要考生分開討論這兩個觀點，然后給出個人看法。此題所羅列的觀點是：1，父母應(yīng)該教小孩；2，學校應(yīng)該教小孩。文章主體部分應(yīng)該這兩個觀點各寫一段。
開頭段
作者用了兩句話平鋪直敘地表達自己的看法：成為社會上有用的個人是重要的。文字簡單平實，說說一個話題的重要性，就足夠了。之后一句話簡明扼要表明了自己的觀點。
主體部分
三句話的論述路徑是：句4是句5的鋪墊, 句5是整段話的立場, 句6是立場（也就是句5）的細化。
句7和句8事實上是一句話的不同說法，是這個段落的主要立場和觀點。
句9 和句10是支持和解釋觀點的句子。句9 和句10有因果關(guān)系。
句9的“experience”作為句10的主語，保持連貫性。
句11是結(jié)論段的作者立場。句12用比較隱晦的語言暗示父母和學校都應(yīng)該擔負教育的責任。
（三）考試資料：
相關(guān)翻譯練習，使用與不同話題類型，注意其中的collocations.
1除非國家采取措施確保國際援助公平地分配，它們很難獲得國際組織的支持。
Unless countries take steps to ensure that international aid is distributed fairly, they will find it difficult to enlist the support of international organizations.
2人們一直有一個想法，法律抑制人的創(chuàng)造力和阻礙社會發(fā)展
Among the public the idea that laws stifle creativity and hinder social development persists.
3有人質(zhì)疑要求員工穿制服的政策
Some people have cast doubt on the policy that requires all employees to wear uniforms
4投資在保險或者債券上確實能夠保護人們抵御通貨膨脹，但是投資者需要警惕價格波動的風險
The investment in insurance or bonds can shield people from insurance but investors should be wary of price volatility.
5鄉(xiāng)村到城市的轉(zhuǎn)移雖然部分解決了農(nóng)村的失業(yè)問題，但是對土地稀缺的城市來說，卻使某些問題更加嚴重
The rural-to-urban shift has partially addressed the unemployment issue in rural areas, but aggravated some problems in land-scarce cities.
6我們現(xiàn)在所知道的環(huán)境問題不過是冰山一角
The environmental problems that are known to us at this stage are merely the tip of the iceberg.
7某些商業(yè)女性的成功促使人們重新思考傳統(tǒng)的觀念：女人不象男人那么果斷和聰明。
The success of some business women prompts people to rethink the traditional belief that women are not as decisive and intelligent as men.
8人們在年輕的時候揮霍金錢，對晚年的生活卻有很大的影響。
People in their early adulthood squander money, a habit that takes its toll in later years.                                    武漢新航道培訓學校  雅思寫作考前預(yù)測精煉6.5分課程（1v3）
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